There definitely are "lit" components. I think it just more so has to do with the fact that there are strong points in this and weak points. Action and MC OPness? def lit ;)
I'm trying not to go too far into the story since I don't want to spoil as much as possible. I definitely think the MC has developed in the most recent arc, but the first few story plot points, it definitely wasn't the main focus... it was just his development of skills
I do agree with most points since they are from the perspective of the first few chaps. (Honestly, its only until much later that the worldbuilding gets better, so i understand your rating for it.)
I suppose all I can say is that your review is very fitting as its based on the first few chaps! I'd like to give a little suggestion of mentioning just how far you've read before starting your reviews though! Not to be negative about it, since its fine with us who know this is just a review from the initial chaps, but there might be others who feel like the reviews are based on the up-to-date chaps?
It's just a tiny suggestion to think about, of course! And I do enjoy both your work and your reviews, so I'm looking forward to the day you'll eventually review both Omniscient Reader & Lore Olympus!!
This is a startling contrast to what I would say if others asked me about the work.
Probably something like, "this is lit."
I guess my English teacher was right when he said to be good at writing, you need to be good at reading first.
There definitely are "lit" components. I think it just more so has to do with the fact that there are strong points in this and weak points. Action and MC OPness? def lit ;)
Great read, thanks!
considering the recent arc in the murim world, the plot and characters deserve a bit higher in my opinion
I'm trying not to go too far into the story since I don't want to spoil as much as possible. I definitely think the MC has developed in the most recent arc, but the first few story plot points, it definitely wasn't the main focus... it was just his development of skills
I do agree with most points since they are from the perspective of the first few chaps. (Honestly, its only until much later that the worldbuilding gets better, so i understand your rating for it.)
I suppose all I can say is that your review is very fitting as its based on the first few chaps! I'd like to give a little suggestion of mentioning just how far you've read before starting your reviews though! Not to be negative about it, since its fine with us who know this is just a review from the initial chaps, but there might be others who feel like the reviews are based on the up-to-date chaps?
It's just a tiny suggestion to think about, of course! And I do enjoy both your work and your reviews, so I'm looking forward to the day you'll eventually review both Omniscient Reader & Lore Olympus!!
I'll take note of putting in bold what chapters I read up to for readers to get a better idea. Thanks for the input ;)