TurtleMe's Weekly Review
He feels definitely more awkward to me. But the overall tone is funny. It makes sense at the end of the day, like your MC, that he hasn't built up a lot of social skills. So while he is strong, he gets a lot of EMOTIONAL DAMAGE.
He feels definitely more awkward to me. But the overall tone is funny. It makes sense at the end of the day, like your MC, that he hasn't built up a lot of social skills. So while he is strong, he gets a lot of EMOTIONAL DAMAGE.